Rewrite a script section to fix a retention dip
Use when your analytics show a clear drop-off at a timestamp and you need to repair that exact passage.
Act as a retention editor for long-form YouTube.
Below is the script passage where viewers drop off, plus the audience retention note.
PASSAGE: {{passage}}
DROP-OFF NOTE: {{drop_note}}
VIDEO GOAL: {{goal}}
Diagnose the 3 most likely reasons viewers leave here (pacing, broken promise, no open loop, filler, tonal flatness). Then rewrite the passage twice: Version A tightens and re-hooks while keeping the same information; Version B restructures with an open loop and a pattern interrupt. Mark every cut you made and every new hook. Keep my voice. End with a one-line on-screen text suggestion to overlay at this moment.Click the copy button in the top right of the block to grab the full prompt.
Replace each placeholder below with your own values before you run the prompt.
- {{passage}}
- {{drop_note}}
- {{goal}}
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