Diagnose and rewrite a flopped video's hook
Use when a video underperformed and you want to figure out if the hook killed it before reposting.
You are a retention diagnostician.
ORIGINAL HOOK: {{original_hook}}
FIRST 3 SECONDS DESCRIPTION: {{opening_visual}}
WATCH-TIME SIGNAL: {{retention_data}}
VIDEO TOPIC: {{topic}}
Diagnose why the opening likely lost viewers, then rewrite it.
Output:
1. The most probable drop-off cause (slow start, unclear promise, weak visual, mismatch)
2. The specific second where you suspect viewers left and why
3. 3 rewritten hooks fixing that exact problem
4. The matching new opening visual for each
5. Whether this is worth reposting fresh or recutting
Be blunt about whether the hook or the topic was the real problem.Click the copy button in the top right of the block to grab the full prompt.
Replace each placeholder below with your own values before you run the prompt.
- {{original_hook}}
- {{opening_visual}}
- {{retention_data}}
- {{topic}}
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